下面是以为同学针对问题Whatisanactivitythatyouenjoydoingwithyourfriendsandwhy?Pleaseincludespecificexamplesanddetailsinyourexplanation."的回答。

TherearetworeasonswhyIthinkso.Onereasonisthatplayingsportshelpuscreatestrongbondsoffriendship.Itcreatesmanyopportunitiesofcooperationifwehavetobeatotherswhenplayinagroup.Idon’tlikeexercisingalone.Itisreallyboringifyouhavetorepeatsomemoves.Iamreallyinterestedinplayingsportswithmyfriends.

第一句是总起句，应该用表起始的连接词，如:inthebeginning,inthefirstplace,等等;第二句是第一句的解释，因此可以用thatistosay,inotherwords等等来联系这些关系。表递进的关系，可以用moreover。下面我们来看看修改后的答案。

AsfarasIamconcerned,Ireallyloveplayingsportswithmyfriends.TherearetworeasonswhyIthinkso.Actually,onereasonisthatplayingsportshelpsuscreatestrongbondsoffriendship.Youknow,itcreatesmanyopportunitiesofcooperationifwehavetobeatotherswhenplayinagroup.Also,Idon’tlikeexercisingalone.Becauseitisreallyboringifyouhavetorepeatsomemoves.Forthesetworeasons,Iamreallyinterestedinplayingsportswithmyfriends.

这样看起来，用上连接词以后，整个答案读起来都通顺了许多。

连接词分类整理

(1)表选择关系或对等关系的连接词：either…or…,neither…nor,or,aswellas…,and,both…and…等

(2)表因果关系或对等关系的连接词：therefore,so,asaresult,astheresultof…,becauseof,dueto…,owingto,thanksto等。

(3)表时间顺序的连接词：themoment,assoonas,atfirst,then,later,meanwhyle,atthebeginning,intheend,beforelong,forthefirs(tsecond…)time,theminute等。

(4)表转折关系的连接词：yet,andyet,but,while,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,however,atthesametime(然而)等。

(5)表解释说明的连接词：thatis,thatistosay,inotherwords,suchas,forinstance,andsoon,etc.andthelike等。

(6)表递进关系的连接词：notonly…but(also),what,smore,what'sworse,besides,inaddition,worsestill,moreover,aboveall等。

(7)表示总结的连接词：inaword,onthewhole,inshort,briefly,inbrief,tosumup,inall等